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Old 06-13-06, 12:26 AM   #7
Phryme
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so ya back bone in this game is history
cause i threw a spiked bat at his spine to nail the victory
Found him around so me and the crew started to chokem' on the block
our hands around ya handle,
......Sqeezen the trigger till we pop R.Glocks

very lackluster verse . i wasnt feeling most of it.

vs

ya gal stands by her beliefs and never changes her position son
she opens her mouth, but dont cry whens shes sticking by her gun's
^ok.
I seen homeboy acting all fruity dont say your not Homo guy
cuz jae brix couldn't look straight in my eyes similar to telling a lie
U aint pimp material... you dont pull any bitches, dawg
Brix aint a baseball player but he hasn't had Sexson so long
you crashed and burned. roger is just dropping and popping murder
....n my punches turn his motor skills looking like ben rothlisbergers

^alot of ur concepts fell through due to the wording but at least they were there.. the closer was a nice current event flip on the motor skills cliche.

v/r.glocks. he just had the better overall verse. comparing all the unquoted line from both sides, roger had the better verse.

straight battle.. the length killed both you guys though.
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