and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...

VS.

the battles barely starting and i'm achin' to trouble you
so ur gonna have to change ur name to Ra cause I'm taking the W.
u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.
'n all the toasters i carry will have u ducking heat
let Raw meat the nine and ask him hows that for fucking beef?



Yeh, this was a bit one-sided. A lot of Raw's verse seemed more suited to audio. You are just trying to pack the multies in there and your punches are lacking because of it. The wording is everything in text, so you need to work on that. The flea market line was pretty 'meh'... but I quoted it anyway. Still though, Opus blew you away even with a keyed half ass verse. He had at least 3 bars that made me laugh.

V/ - Opus/Prhyme

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