nice piece... sorta like a motivational speach, but i was feelin it... i really like the structure, and cutting it up into the separate stanzas made it easier to get (w/out forgetting it's purpose).... nice flow and not many wasted words... nice, keep writin playa...

__________________


"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled