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Old 06-14-06, 03:27 AM   #1
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
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Voted For: Tony.Self

Your the reason schools preachin safesex to sluts
"CHo i am your father"i shoulda punched ya mom in the gut

Best bar ^

LMFAO Tony killed this kind, he had the far better punches
flowed really decent and he's verse was just loads better.

E did come nice your verse was alright, but I wasn't feeling
the flow of it the strc was just messy and it didn't sound
right when I was reading it.

U come alright but just sort out your strc, need more
personals and a bit more complexity,.. I all Tony won this
hands down really.

Stay up both

1~