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Old 06-14-06, 04:40 PM   #9
da sein
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you’re a newb, type elementary and give your bestest drop
I’m rusty…
So when punches land you need a tetanus shot
kids shook, I’mma watch ‘em tremor like seismologists
than Crack Rex Skull like a clumsy archeologist
Your girl spreading rumors, sex life continues to plummet
no one on his dick, even when he sleep on his stomach

vs

after RV i'll post hes face on the front page with the words "oppasit of a troop"
so hollows'll tell how i made him swallow this L like i force fed the nigga alphabet soup
tell the truth, u should of started with the rookies befor u got this "mobster invold"
cuz u'r skill's remind me of JLO... No-one wanted you around like in "monster-in-law"


decent bout

ace had three solid quotables

rex had wording issues...those two lines were ok...the aces from the deck line could've worked if u worded it better...keep writing

v-Ace
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