ok...in the nicest way possible....I hated it. like...i didnt like a single thing about it. first off...beat choice didnt work well with ur voice. ur voice was HELLA MUFFLED. u should work on some mixxing. ur flow was more like just talking, and talking, and talking...did u even listen to the beat when u wrote the song?

id suggest going out and buying a new microphone that isnt $15 dollars and from Radio Shack. next...go download a program where u can do some basic vocal mixxing. and then, go spend about 3 hours...and dig thru Soundclick to find some instrumentals that might match ur voice betta.

AND WHEN ALL THAT IS SED AND DONE... go turn on a Cassidy track and take some notes on flowwing. then re-rewrite, re-record, and re-mix it. good luck

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