View Single Post
Old 06-15-06, 11:24 PM   #6
Phluent
New to RV
 
Phluent's Avatar
 
Posts: 26
From: indianapolis
IP:

word, i tried this once, to get an ex back.

quality could be better. i dont like how you talked over the hook. flow was off and on. more off then on though. lyrics were ehhhh. "id knit you a sweater, but i dont know hoowwww" no. lol. dont EVER extend your words to flow. especially when it didnt flow in the first place. and get more into your recording and the outcome will be a lot better.

upgrade your equipment too

who made this beat? ive heard it before but i dont remember the producer

good looks, hit up my track!
__________________
^ dopest shit said all day
  Reply With Quote