k, thanx, I was really trying something new here, I guess it didn't really work. Aw well.
I know what this piece of works means to me, but it's one of those kinds of poems that you're not supposed to understand, and you have to take it however you want to take it, it can mean anything. And it wasn't just to be obsene and shock, there was some meaning behind it, but I guess I didn't express it clear enough,
Oh well, first and last time I try something like this anyway, I just wanted to experimant, lol