ok... ok.... beat was different... i'm feeling that jump-off right there.... wasn't sure how the hook was gonna fit but that shyt was type smooth... kudos for that...

UNF... lol... you came a long way man.... ya quality is so much better it's almost scary...lol... it's still not perfected...but the shyt's better than mine.... lol... and i was giving YOU pointers on how to adjust ya shyt at one point... but uhhh... i gotta fix for my issues...lol..werd...

L. VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! holla atcha boy! ya flipped it with that last line... "had to tell him i had AIDS"...whoa... then the hook... crazy... only thing really hurting you on this is ya quality and ya delivery coulda been tweaked a lil...

overall this was a pretty decent song that flowed from verse to verse nicely... storyline kept it's integrity and didn't jump around from one idea to the next... shyt was straight...

get at me for them collabos!!!!!!!!!!

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