Thread: Verbal Carnage
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Old 06-17-06, 03:23 PM   #11
Ca'lam
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forgot to leave feed lmao.


first verse - pretty much a good verse. flow was on point. lyrics were nice. really solid verse.


second verse (bitch ) - feeling the entrance. i always liked your delivery. you are really good with complex rhyming. flow shook a time or two, but it was pretty dope the whole way through.


last verse - i actually like this delivery. the influcuation in ya voice gives your verse something unique. kinda like Jins emotion. was feeling it.

Hook - lyrically it was on point like a muphuca. but it seems like it was placed a litte bit behind the beat. but it sounded straight as is. just maybe placed a lil off


solid drop fellas
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