Voted For: TheKid_Sense

whew!! Tha boy Kid_sense killed this one...overall, this was a one sided battle. Kid sense took it in every shape, form and fashion.

Chip-I could tell you got a lil skillz, but ya bars aint there yet. First off, the structure of your verse just looks off. Look at kid_sense, then look at yours. That says a lot about a battle. I know it may not seem like it but it does. Also, another big thing about a battle is the opener. The opener says alot about how ur verse is gunna be and rather or not the reader should take his time to finish reading ur verse or not. U should always have a clever and interesting/funny opener. ALWAYS! ur opener didn't even rhyme. I think u were tryna get there...u were on the right track, dissing him and all...but once again, u fell kinda short. No hate tho. What I wasn't feeling about ur verse was just the lack of interest I had in it. It was boring, it was stretched, so alot of things didn't make a lick of sense. Keep coming with them personals tho, u'll get there with that...but in this one, I felt ur challenger came off way to hard for you....

Kid_Sense- yea...you took this one, but you can't win em all like this. Even though you did have a better verse, you always gotta step your game up, cause theirs always better competitors out there then you. Unless you Hov' or something, but that's a different story...lol...But, I like how you stayed consistent throughout ur verse. You started off hard and you stayed that way. Another thing I noticed you did different then your competitor, was you stayed with the same flow style...U had a good opener...fell off just a lil bit, but still picked it back up with the last bar. I could tell this one was easy for you. But, one thing you need to work on is harder hitting personals. In a text battle, or any kind of battle, personals win it for you. Just come harder than that and I can see you'll be alot better.

Overall-Like i said, kidsense took this one hands down. More creativity...better style, and harder hitting personals. Ya'll both got skillz, just not using em right. Just keep coming strong and elevate...


-Eazy

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