incredible...this was a very tight OM..

yeah the whole thang was flowing so well

..vocab was just ...

concept was clear...i got ur point and it was just nice to see something different from the usuals on rv plus u did it all by urself...that's a plus mayne..keep them coming...i like it..by the time i was done reading it was like i just came bak to earth after trooping into the mind of someone..meaning i was feeling the emotion...this was definitely cool...nice job pa!

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