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Old 06-21-06, 10:39 AM   #6
Nasdeey
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Ace Heratoga

best line
You so wet behind the ears, you short circuted ya head phones

note: you started off good with the personal but faded away from it...seriously punches and personals win a battle , also your flow was choppy work on your wordin to level off your lines at the same spot it'll flow better...

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Ghost W. Riter

best lines
this battle's gonna get hairy. cuz I'ma punch ya ribs til ya sideburns
cuz face it, u couldnt raze eyebrows if u were a clumsy barber (nice closer)

note: no personals, but your wordplay was there and flow structure was decent
makin you punches hit on time decent verse if you had a couple of personals in there it would've been murda

vote: Ghost W. Riter (for better punches, metas, flow structure)
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