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I don't lose
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IP:
you dont sound too comfortable its like your tense tryin to get the words out, or it sounds like on this....the hook is kinds corney but catchy so its not bad, i dunno id say you need some work....the lyrics were pretty decent tho....eh i unno
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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