Listening...
Loved working with this beat...got me on the radio
Wow...quality is horrible...hook was alright I suppose. Pretty choppy though.
Your delivery is good. It doesnt change but it's good. Flow is pretty good, nice and fast, vocals are pretty low. Flow does fall off due to your gasping at some points in the track.
Overall, pretty good from your last stuff. Keep it up.
RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230369