listening.....

i like the intro to the beat....midievil type ish....

hook kicks in....first thing i notice is quality is lacking....hook goes with the beat...i feel if it was mixed better...itd be more catchy...but its kinda muffly.....

also if you added like some whispering in the background of the hook..it would add to it...hooks where u take a lot of spaces inbetween words benefit from that......its almost like a 2nd hook in the background if u know what i mean


lyrics are good....from what i can hear.....everything is coo really....

just up the quality.....

please rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

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