word @ me about to post a song to this beat lol...i love this beat with a passion...its dope


anyways.......



flow kinda seems a bit choppy at the start...just sounded weird to me...it caught on quick though.......

hook is coo...could be a bit more catchy....only thing ill remember is the start where u say falling star falling star.......

delivery is good....as well as your emotion...

nice ending to the story....it wasnt anything that really put you in shock...but it was good nontheless...i dont think the purpose of it was to shock though....

overall nice stuff...other than lil minor things..

please rtf..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

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