Thread: Ike - Goodnight
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Old 06-23-06, 12:25 AM   #3
Jay Rose
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the knife to the wrist line seemed off, but the hook was banannas...very thought provoking, deep, and well preformed....effects on it just added to the ill ass appeal of it, there are parts where the verses can be upped, honestly i say you work on that n take this to a studio n try n get it on a demo...this is the kinda hook that can get you noticed....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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