Yeah This Was Pretty Nice Drop

Flow Was Alright, Interesting Way You Structured This To Grip The Flow, That Was Cool InItself and why the fuck am i talking in capitals
anyway
yeah the structure of the flow was interesting but the actuall flow itself was a bit bland, try and make it off the wall with multi-syllabic rhyming/add some half rhymes in etc


content wise i was feelin' a few of your lines:

Lost track of time, his name, and everything else in this world

Nice

As feelings commence, frustration and hatred remain clashing

that was cool, but it's only a foundation to develop some sick ideas..the remain clashing concept caught my eyes perhaps you could of linked in your feelings clashing with a clash of the titan ideas or added a w'play around the clash being the rock band

Ok Return the favour on my Horrorcore verse Ayperish when it's posted plz

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...254#post2777254

thanks