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Old 06-24-06, 10:21 AM   #10
Nasdeey
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Raw King

Cuz unless I stick my foot up ur ass…then I doubt ud ever have it in u…
So get a handle, u lose ur grip and get ate like kids launches
Id type my words in brail then cough on em just so u could feel some sick punches…

stand out bars

not really a good structure you punches was there but some of em are popular
choppy flow...no personals

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SlicKnife


Crude but its true n your name isn’t confusing the truth...
‘Cause your raw...in the sense we’ve unearthed the biggest ever loser in you
nice

But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon
good personal

nice verse overall, personal punches wordplay an actual battle verse

vote: SlicKnife (this was one sided)
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