beat is ok....if it was done a lil bit better itd be fire....but..i dunno...im a lil unsure about it

flow is pretty good.......

lyrics is ok.....could be upped

vocals are muffled a bit...cant understand a lot of what your saying...they should be raised a lil bit as well...

you really got a nice voice...once you develop a lil more...i think u gonna be dope...its just a matter of time...

please rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

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