What's hot:
beat is good
flow is good
lyrics are well thought out
hook flew by...so I missed it the first time...but it's good.


What's not: intro is too long...get to the point
I'm still not buying your delivery, what others call "emotion" I call whining on track and it's annoying to me...It's not bad...but, it's mostly because your voice is still finding it's place...i.e., puberty

Your flow becomes repetitive after the 1st verse and I lost interest.

Overall: it's a good track, but not the best I've heard on RV by a long shot.


Keep em rollin.

**yea, same beat LE used for something...