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Old 06-25-06, 03:07 PM   #4
Young Kidd (LM)
Better THAN You!
 
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Listening...

Beat is pretty nice, i like it...

Content was pretty good, now that i hear the hook i have this beat, lol , you speeded it up, you could have done it to the slower one because it might fit, unless you tried that... lol but otherwise the hook is low and maybe add something to it to make it your on.

Second verse is pretty good, i like it better than the first seems a little more emotion because your just going off on it.....so far it's pretty good nothing i can really find cept for maybe you can up some emotion into it and add a little more presense but otherwise

nice track..
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