Actually i didnt meant the lines, i meant the scheme it stretched out inner, outer rhymes and multi's to hell..

like

You Know Morbids Homing...And Death? Of Course Its Closing ,

As I Smash Your Thorax Through Your Respiratory System.... < This part isnt even Needed and fucks up the rhyming system as well as makes the line in itself stretched

Breathing Will Burn Smoldering , As You 'Lungyi elder!' Without Old Generations Of Burma Clothing (Lung yield Duh!)

or even just remove the "Through Your Respiratory System" part...

You Know Morbids Homing...And Death? Or Course Its Closing,
Smash Ya Thorax, Breathing? Will Burn And Smolder,
As Your Lungyi Elder without Old Generations OF Burma Clothing,

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