Listenin', yeah beat is on the anthem tip fam, nice choice, heard it before but its real tight...aight well first thing I notice is your accent..its not hurting tho..hook is a nice touch, I like the lyrics and the verse is decent too...flow is ookay but the best thing is your emotion, thats real nice...and breath control is good..but what you do gtta work on is the flow and speaking up on some words...quality aint good, if you had better mixing specially on the hook shit wud be alot more nicer...so what I suggest in this song..try work on the presence and the flow..dont pack as many words in and use more small-syllable multis nah mean...nice track I was quite taken away by the effort you made nice...
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can you rtf plz thanks