Listenin', yeah heard beat before shit is nice..cuda done with an intro with talking or summin...Triple yo hook is real nice...lyrics are real nice and I like how you delivered...Paranoid...flow is gettin better..but yeh this is still monotonous and robotic...it kinda sounds ure just reading the lyrics and thats all u tryna do nah mean...lyrics are decent cudda done with alot more multis but its decent, it was an okay verse but Ive heard better fam...
Triple's verse - thats wasup mayne...the flow is decent and the lyrics are real good too...emotion is good too, trip you also got a lil robotic style but the thing is u put much more emotion n u fluctuating words so thats why ure shit is what it is so yeah that shit is nice as hell...
Nice jawn yall
can you rtf plz:
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