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Old 06-26-06, 02:52 PM   #13
Paranoid
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The beat is pretty ill fa sure. Your lyrics are weak man, you say nothin in this track. It's to much of a boast or w/e, it's way to mainstream man. You don't seem like your a gangsta but I guess this is money makin music. Your flo9w is solid though and your pressence is strong. You didn't slurr shit like you usually do, I could understand everything you said on this one. But it didn't mean anything man, all this track was to me was "blah blah blah blah" sorry man but it just aint creative and it aint original. But you did good on what you usually do weak on lol.
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