I haven't read all of this yet. But what I have read, seems very good, and entertaining. I'm not one to give out critiques to people, but I do have one for you, if you'll take it. Try not to be overly wordy. Sometimes it seems a bit pretentious, and may unkowingly, make people not want to read your piece. But this had good word usage and therefore made up for it. Very nice.

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