Originally Posted by Acuity

this sing wudda been a decent rounded track if it werent 4 the completely off key singin on the chorus,i used 2 sing a lil, and sorry bro but its just off... its jus out of pitch and dont fit, the actual rapping is all good, no real critique points....except maybe a slightly softer delivery wudda worked in places..beat is really un-rap but u rock it very well, holding ur flow well without the snare/bass well...okay track, needs polishing tho...

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