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Old 06-27-06, 06:33 PM   #25
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Wack faggot. I’m rippin’ it up and endin’ this bout too fast
And I know ya can’t stand a loss. .
. . so I’ll plant you dead on ure ass!
OK OPPENING NOTHING TO GO WOW OVER BUT GOOD

Honestly, I don’t care if I lose… u ain’t worth my shit
So I’ll make this a brief case – and then beat ya to death with it.
GOOD PUNCH...AGAIN REALLY NOTHING SPECIAL BUT GOOD.......

Kid, ure fucking wack… but a lyrical assassin first
And its true ’coz ure wack lyrics. .
. . have assassinated our chance of seein’ u drop a decent verse
NICE LINE BUT IT REALLY KINDA STRETCH SO I HAD TO READ IT TWICE TO GET IT DOWN

I see you accept visa, discovery, mastercard. . well, look. .
I don’t care ‘coz son in this battle. .
. . you’ll just be credited as being the WACK FUCK!!
UR WORST LINE SO FAR

But yo, I’m winnin’ this. . losing to you is sumthin I can’t afford. .
Plus, I’m known to drop Knights… and the entire fucking chess board!
A PERSONAL BUT ITS LIKE A BIG FILLER BAR

Now look, and listen up. . I’m about kill this off quick. .
‘Coz Knight’s a thorn in my side,
. .so watch me pull out and toss this little prick!
i KNOW WAT U MENT BUT I WASNT FEELING IT

Lets philosophise, ure girl’s a bowling ball of a whore. .
Ya see, I rolled that bitch into the gutter. . and she still came back for more!
KINDA WIERD CUZ UR GIRL JOKES ARE DEAD BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD

I owned that bitch, now onto you. . and you know that I’m able. .
I’ll murder you knight, and every motherfucker at ure round table!
WAK LINE ON THE REAL...JUST A BIG FILLER

I’m keyin’ this verse, and it’s game over… call it a hunch. .
I’m coming with a verse that lacks luster. .
. .ure just comin’ with one that lacks a decent punch.
WOULDV FLOWD BETTER IF U DROPPED THE DECENT AND LEFT THE PUNCH...BUT IT AIEGHT.

Faggot. I’m done with you. . and yo, I was actually being nice
And yo, we cud say this is a duel. . I mean, now I’ve whored you twice
OK ENDING. COULDV BEEN WORDED BETTER.

ur verse was good but it had a lot of fillers especially on the first line and u talked about ending the battle about 6 or 7 times through out the verse. ok punches. about 1 or 2 good personals. decent flow. u killed ursefl wit the ur girlfriend jokes and that intro that made u sound like if u were protecting some kind of reputation on this site. dont beef over a battle. thats just wak man. but good verse.....8/10



I battled mimesis 2 days ago, ask me if i'm surprised to see him dude
it's not enough you stole his style you gotta steal his wins too
REALLY WAK OPPENER. U MAY HAVE JUST WORDED IT WRONG

for real dude you eat off mim like you stole his edible drawers
and i'd beat you BLACK and leave you red, but we'd mistake his avy for yours
FIRST LINE WAS WAK, 2ND LINE WAS OK

really miminick SnickER Bars aren't more than wack weak piles
but you're gettin fat off mimesis, you should bite fat free styles
UR BEST LINE SO FAR BUT UR PUTTING TOO MUCH INTO THE WHOLE HIM TRYING TO BE LIKE MIM SHIT. LET IT GO.

you wanna wile homie i'll show you how
you fire? Well cool i'll make a wish then.....
.................................................. ...................when i blow you out
GAY PUNCH

I would name who mod's LBL but that's gettin played like your raps and gimmicks
Know how i know that leagues for the best.......
.................................................. .....................cause you don't even battle in it
NOT A SMART LINE REALLY CUZ HE DOES BATTLE IN IT.

Now it's RV's permanant league so don't ever rap into it
didn't you used to mod a text league? yea, whatever happened to it?
GOOD PERSONAL BUT NOT THAT GOOD REALLY

Your lucky these fuckers like you, they all know you're played, you're just ass man
Nick Fletcher finally had King Solo throned.......in the nearest trash can
GOOD PERSONAL

all his flo comes out of his cheeks, he's the shit...yea that's a played 2 bars
sorry i was distracted by that dick in your ass with the tatto that says "and you are"
WAK

I'm tired of rap congrats you've killed another's spirit, get out of my face-book
aren't you in college or DOING SOMETHING with your life instead of crowding my space look
NOPE...WORST LINE. i THAUGHT IT WAS GONNA BE GOOD BUT i WAS WRONG.

basically u put down a lot of wak lines wit some good personals but u couldnt pull this one off well enough to get the win. u shouldnt stick to on personal for like 4 bars, that shows u dont have too much to say and then u use a lot of fillers just to reach the max. but good try on this battle. it wasnt a total let down like a lot of other battles usually are.

personals - NF
Flow - NS
Structure - NS
Punches - NF
Metas - none
Multis - none
worplay - NF
Vocab - none

V/Nick Fletcher
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