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Old 06-28-06, 02:04 AM   #15
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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returing the feed on the battle track i forgot i had posted...haha....but all feed is apprieated, so theeeeeeeeeee song now....

k i liked the whole flow of it all n i didnt pay much attention to they lyrics but right off the bat ima tell you you need to up your vocals, and you sound a lil over compressed, it makes your quality seem way behind triple n which is making the song seem like it doesnt mesh too good....but i also left feed on your text battle haha, ie i owned the kid
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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