Damn, I liked this shit. I'd like to see something done with the hook maybe. Some ecko's would be nice off some of your dubs. Your flow was solid though, also delivered well with a smooth emotion. It sounded perfect man, it had my head bumpin. Alotta your shits pretty ill but if you mastered this it'd be very ill man. but overall I thought you took this nice, you did a great job man.
rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629
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