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I see dumb people
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Originally Posted by Ysdat
Playing..........
Intros cool.... beats ok... quality is good,flows on point,emotions cool.
Some what deep,feel you could of gone deeper with this, ok lyrics.
Hooks cool, feeling it.
next verse is nice aswell, nice dubs and adlibs through out
decent track bro.
Hit up -I cant wait- if you havent allready
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intro is nice. beat ain't my type of ish tho. Upped quality since I last heard you. Nice flow so far. Work on emotion a bit. Lyrics aiight, no standout lines, or wack ones just avg.
I like the hook nice vibe to it, catchy and stuff lol NExt verse is coo too. pretty much the same as the first for feedback purposes tho
overall not a bad track, man. stay up. pc one
RTFplz:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662
EZ
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