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Old 06-28-06, 04:13 PM   #11
Ca'lam
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im returnin the favor.



hmm..

beat is hot.

chorus - it was flowin and all, but i doubt yous a poppa mayne. you wouldnt be on the internet with a homestudio-starter kit dropping tracks on rapverse. so your tracks "real" factor just got shitted on. (and real tracks are how get you an audience).


Verses - Flow was on point pretty much whole time, presence was nice. Not to much to comment on tho. But if i overlook the content (which IS REALLY hard for me to do)...... It was a Solid Track. Had a catchy Chorus, and a Solid 3. would get some play in "gangstas" whips.
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