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Voted For: SPuL™

Aight yo this was actually a hot battle:

Make you 'Pay for your bars' like "saloon bills" cuz when i'm 'Mad, a-Gat-Scar (madagascar) like 'Cartoon Films"..
So go and act-hard , but cruise through my ville, and 'get blasted out the window' like 'car-tunes' we'll see
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The first 2 bars of that was tight liked the wordplay fo real and the concept, the second was weak and tired so fo dat 7/10

And like 'heavy metal chess' im 'rockin rooks' (rookies)..
Melt ya chest, drop spul n run, like 'gun-dodgin crooks', and then take ya head and "Wall It" like 'Pocket Books..!
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Aight decent not great tho, decent concept not executed well enough 5/10

"Murdered by 'Caged Dogs' da way u get 'mauled and killed wit a pen bitch'
Slap the taste out ya mouth, so we can 'see-spul-spit-sense'.. feed dude ten-clips, and cover 'his Pallet wit shells' Like "SeaFood-shipments"..
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woahhh aight tht was crazyy haa, shit that was a sick line fam...likin the gun talk my typa ish..8/10

You'll get cut like i brought in a 'new-cast', when i leave ur 'tubes-slashed'
U gon burn dis newb-fast??. im a vet please I'm so tight on the mic I give him "Booth-Cramps.." and u can 'nazi my skills' like "German Bootcamps..."
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ehhhhh, concept nice, flowed tight, multis good, execution not good..6/10

Have a 'stabbin-frenzy' and 'put more shit through spul den B's rectum
Nobody respects him.. and in a battle its nothin to 'take a baby out' like "C-Sections..
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haha dat was tight fo real...nice line 9/10

You Plant 2 bury me? please! I'll have dis 'pussy' bleeding wit 'sanitary-needs'
So watch as these 'hits' 'r'ock his world' like planetary fiends, and make B-leave (make believe) like "Imaginary Trees"....!!!
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dope closer ended nice..8/10

You stay with sticks and balls like lacrosse, you make me puke
The way I'm rapin' this bitch, it only fits that his name is Duke
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haha thats a funy line, nice opener 7/10

That second pic is pretty homo with you puckering up like that
I'd send an uppercut to your lip...
.........................................but I'm afraid it might fight back!
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LMAOOOO hahaa damn lmaoo 9/10 ahha nice work with the pictures

So fall back, kid... damn, you're wack, I've had it
Spray shots to your body like Axe or Tag, kid
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decent line...filler perhaps...6/10

So it's best you bag quick, cuz... I won't tell you later
You can try to step your game up, me, I'll take the elevator!
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haha yo shit is funny i like dat in a verse..nice hit on the elevator shit/..8/10

It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Markus?...
... hell nah, Mar, kus my ass!
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haha nice word play funny again..9/10

Got your hat tipped up, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!^^^
lmfaoo haha 9/10 hot closer

Humor: Spul
Flow: Markus
Lyrics: Spul
Multis: Markus
Enjoyable: Spul

It was mad close but i think spul got this...1