ehhhh... omma lot more critical than everyone else... it was aiight but lyrically it didn't really grab me.... the beat was cool... the hook was straighth but that echo stuff needs to go... it mad e the track seem.. i don't know... kinda like ya got tired of mixing it down... flow was ok from both... not really too many quotables besides the drive by line... i'd expect a comeback for this simply because i don't think it was damaging enough... both came with a different level of quality... spul... up ya vocals a tad, man... first time i really listened to ya stuff... not bad... but unlike others... i concentrate on the lyrics and how ya put ya werds and thoughts together... to me, as a lyricist, that's more important than the beat (which is a close second)... content and how you get ya point across are what make or break you on a diss track... delivery has gotta be convincing too...

i wouldn't have wasted time on a 13 yo personally, unless he happened to spit some flamage that i just HAD to retaliate, nah mean?... kids that age gon talk trash regardless...

but yeah... decent... nothing extraordinary, but not a bad track...

ez

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