Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for XJenxIsxAxBozzX
IP:
Both of you need to work on your punches a lot. Very simplistic from you both... Which is ok, but you need to read some battles, in order to get a feel for what a creative punchline is.... Because if you are too simple, then anyone can write like you. Although I could've sworn theory was a lot better than he dropped, maybe he dropped below his normal. either way, I felt Jen came with slightly harder punches and actually had multies rather than one syllable rhyming.
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