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Old 06-29-06, 10:38 AM   #6
Nasdeey
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Faime S. Quotez

pros
Roger, you might have some skills, but you just dont spit with it.
so treat the Contendership like pussy. .
.....dont even think about it, cause ya not gettin it!
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!


cons(these couple of bars don't rhyme homie...
Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!
All the sites you battle on, you lose, thats what the fact is.
ya 'feeling defeat in many places', so it filed for sexual harrassment!

note: it got to rhyme holmes...couple of nice punches...stretch the flow a tad bit...but step it up homie

vs.

Roger Glocks


pros
its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun
I could say ''i got more rep on your home site'' and mean it ,right?
^^but this goes without saying like a mime during a green light

cons(this bar didn't rhyme but it finish with nice wordplay..that sucks)
I would said match this fiyah. but the trail will burn you into submission
....my inferno has you ''thinking bout ur Burns' more then Mr. Smithers

note: nice verse overall...decent with a rhyme scheme...fell off on a bar but you picked it up...step it up kidd

vote: Roger Glocks (more direct and more effective bars out of the two)

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