Met-A-4
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IP:
I would said match this fiyah. but the trail will burn you into submission
....my inferno has you ''thinking bout ur Burns' more then Mr. Smithers
^see this? its a good concept, just terribly worded.. also didn't rhyme well, either.
I could say ''i got more rep on your home site'' and mean it ,right?
^^but this goes without saying like a mime during a green light
^another, pretty good concept, but also worded badly
vs.
Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!
Who you think you teaching with ya text? Please, you got it shook
only time you 'kicking knowledge' is 'playin soccer with college books'
You not a crook, yet rapping about crimes? This emcee's fake.
only 'fell on E/felony you got' ...is your 'gas meter on an empty tank'!
^thats nice, but we get the felony nameplay. don't do this(fell on E/felony) again. looks newb'ish.
Just quit, you're never making a change with what ya spittin, dude
only way you 'making Em pack/impact'. .
.....is forcing Slim Shady to take a trip with you!
^u did it again, but not bad.
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!
^nice concept, but could've been worded alot better.
well, this was really one sided. i expected alot better from roger, whose supposed to be this awsome battler. honestly, i wasn't feelin shit from his verse. shotty wording, old concepts and just an all around lack of a verse. but on the other hand, Faime did well. good concepts, better wording and just an all around better verse, imo. good job to that.
v/ Faime
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