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Old 06-29-06, 08:02 PM   #17
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
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faggot, think u're cool cuz u got some net friends
im not here to bond wit u, u're here just to make amens//

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Not a solid opener, but it was ok. Could of dopped ALOT better for your opener though.

u ugly fuck, i buck shots, u buck teeth
the fitted to big for ya head, like a magnum on a Chinese//

^
Ok personal, and good meta. one of your better punches in this battle even if it is slightly played.

You cryin bout bein more ghetto then a black man
u're garbage, ya jamacian urself wack, don't know how to act man//
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kind fo a persoanl, but wasnt excicuted properly, should of been alot better, turned into more of a filler.

You may see me as a concided little bitch
I guess I am cause I want a dude wit more than a 3 inch dick//
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ROFL! cool punch


no1 respects you, in this battle...u're a gonner, er'yone fears me
droppin u from long stories, cuz it seems er'yone has taken Theory//
^ meh, closer should of been alot better, but it done the trick i spose.



Theory your verse doesnt rhyme at all.
well with the exception of car,are,scar. Basically dopped weak as fuck and didnt do anything in this battle,except link to her posts but still didnt excecute the linking properly.

meh.

weak battle, both dropped fucked up.