Beats very nice,dont fuck it up!!!!!J/p
...anyway im feelin your flow its real nice....the rhyme scheme is koo,nice! its mad diffwerent....like the changes,good!....anyway deliverys koo,could be upped a lot as it seems your rappin for the sake of it,Meh...you could come with more anger as its a diss,BUT i think your mic takes a lot away from this track as it seems you are spitting in the background and not actually spitting on the beat that much,emotions koo,feelin it,i like how you support the beat with the vocals which seem to be mixed in with the beat to make it sound fluid,nice,i think you need to eq it a lil better....i think your presence is alrgiht BUT you mic,like i said,takes soooooo much away from your presence,delivery....either get a new one or get a better mixing process..j wonderin..what mic have you got???????Seems cheap lol
......I like the lyrics but as you didnt write them meh..but i know you can write well so its all good...Well all this said i think its a nice track but your mic def takes a shitload away from your presence...........just get a new mic and your all set!!I'd say youd be one of the better audio heads on RV if you got a better mic..BTW YOU HAVE A DOPE TASTE IN BEATS haha
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