the medicine man
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IP:
king?naw u tha queen of rappin notice as im racking this Murking
ill give u 2 slaps & you wont HitBacks like an Inaccurate Burping
LMAO I DIG THIS TROOP
ill put you wit a coughin if you sick or not cuz AI run it like bosses
this bitches soundclick link stretches... out further than his losses
did the mathematics and 99% of ya shit is sum garbage trackage
how the fuck yo style raw when it aint never been out the package
NICE
VS
is that all u got?..pfft...dawg, u nothing like a criminal.....................
..................... trying to hurt wit hugs/
cuz I dont care where u from...............
.....................but I'll still beat u to death wit a "dirty glove/
DOG PLEASE DONT CONFUSE THIS AS HATE BUT, YOUR STRUCTURE STYLE IS ALMOST UNBEARABLE TO READ THRU, MAKES IT HARD TO REALIZE WHERE THE PUNCH ENDS AND WHEN THE NEXT LINE BEGINS, I WOULD FOCUS ON DOING SOME STRUCTURE CHANGES AND FORMATTING YOUR PUNCHES BETTER, ALSO IF YOU NEED TO EXPLAIN, LIMIT IT AS MUCH AS YOU CAN, NEVER DROP PARAGRAPH EXPLAINATIONS
GET READ OF THE "'S AND EXTRA STUFF THAT JUST CLUTTERS YOUR VERSE
AND THEN FOCUS ON DROPPING CLEAR VERSES ON YUOUR OPPONANT
BUT KEEP YOUR HEAD UP
V/ TROOP
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