wow..............suuuuuupper wak on both side...at first I was gonna vote but whos' got the least wak verse would just be waste of time really...theory..u just need to work on ur flow and structure. ur rhyme style is too basic and I feel like I could get more from reading a lil kids story time book then one of ur verses man. just come more complex and keep ur line to 2 lines equals 1 bar concept dawg and u'll be str8.
Jen...u did a lil better then theory but u had a line that just killlllllled it for me. " ya jamacian urself wack"? u just made urself wak by saying that shit. I liked some parts of ur verse but that one line just fucked it up. u both came too commen wit the she's a girl so she must be a slut and he's a guy so he must have small dick shit. thats for niggaz that cant spit. try harder next time both of u. 1

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