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Old 07-01-06, 04:28 PM   #2
TonyTone
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intro gots too much static i hope it's not just because ya quality is that bad lol
ok beat's not my type but you ride it well. some of the dubs are a lil too loud, needs a bit more emotion as well cuz it's startin to get kinda boring. hmmmm.....lyrics well for this type of track it's what i expected so not much to say about that. hook actually gots my head noddin a bit. ok 2nd verse is better, sounds like u put some more emotion forth this time. flow got a lil shaky in a couple places but besides that it's pretty much on point but i wish u would change up the rhyme scheme in some places cuz it starts getting uninteresting. not bad keep droppin
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