This Shit Wasnt That Bad, Fuck What Them Dudes Was Sayin... It Seems Like You Got A Fast Flow That Dont Pause Alot, I Was Readin It Without A Pause After Every Line And It Seemed Like It Flowed Fine, The Way It Was Typed Up Just May Confuse Some Amatures. And I Didnt Know If This Was Suppost To Depict The Pain And Struggle A Pregnant Teen Goes Through Or If It Was Just A Muhfucken Penthouse Letter About A Slut. But It Was Straight Keep Doin Ya Thing.

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