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Originally Posted by AkHiLeEz_SkYLL
i don't doubt this piece does. however, imagery is mentioned ALOT on this site and it's dope to have some good imagery, it's annoying to hear about the lacking of which when there's more to say about the initial piece.
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ok, my way of giving feed is to mainly point out what I see it lacking in.
if I was to straight prop you, and not point out were you went wrong, would you elevate?
so yeh, Im a better writer than you so take it as a compliment that i even took tiem to look at your boring peice.
