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Originally Posted by Ysdat

ok, my way of giving feed is to mainly point out what I see it lacking in.

if I was to straight prop you, and not point out were you went wrong, would you elevate?

so yeh, Im a better writer than you so take it as a compliment that i even took tiem to look at your boring peice.

imagery is a literary term that can boost the quality of a piece of writing. that's all son. so to suggest that you're better than me is an opinion you're simply throwing out there. your commenting of my shit is your choice. i've had thousands of better feed on all of my work so i highly doubt i'm "lucky" to have your ass comment on a piece i wrote a year ago when your feed is based on "imagery". and elevate? i'm laugin' at that. this piece didn't flop because it was lacking imagery, it didn't have it, so you felt like "oh he's not a good writer because there's no imagery, yup."...thanks for that laugh. this entire ordeal is hilarious.

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