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The Alien Toung
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love this beat man.....
lets see wut ya do w it....trips voice nice....libs r hot here...like the chill delevery here ..
1st verse...emotion is a bit lackluster...like u dont got ur shit memoriced, jus recitin off paper, so, delevery is low....flow is not bad...but better presence would help a lot...lyrics was..sec..rewiniding..lyrics was the best thing about this verse here...try flowing ur verse oiut 10-20 times b4 u lay it down....might help
hooks ill...did trip write it or you ?
trip comes in nice...quality is real nice, production wise n shit...flows nice, delevery n shits their...lyrics is not bad ..best thing here was the production , good all around though
hooks still nice.....
no 3rd eh ? iight then...not bad guys
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Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"
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Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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