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Old 07-03-06, 08:43 PM   #5
Paranoid
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Best shit ever man, this is one mainstream feel i like man. Lyrics were flossin good man, nice flows. Great hook man your gurl sounds so dirty, which gives it a real feel to it man. Konvict your verse was vey smooth, nice man. Laid back and shit, kept it cool. Actually this is the fav track from you. Kontro your verse was ill, you shoulda turned up the vocals a tad bit though, I could still understand you. I've heard better from you but you still had a feel to it with the flow and smoothness of your delivery. And key was good, laid back work on that man it sounds way better. But it seems like you have trouble with it like I do. It'll break through, emotional wise your good though. Overall nice track fellas.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629
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