Not bad lyrically man, but you know what, it's still mainstream man. You can spit ill lyrics but your beats mainstream, your styles mainstream and your flow is slow as well. But yo regardless it was good, I liked it...the beat was to intense, I was hopin you'd prove you can do it fast. But even the metaphor's kicked on that short verse. not bad job man, I also enjoyed the verse on Hey Ma with Kon and Key. overall nice job

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